Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Our Little Miss Writer

*Below is a copy of  the essay that Princess wrote.


SUCCESS IN THE 21ST CENTURY

            There are important things that I think are to be taught to us for us to succeed in the 21st century. The three most important things are, working with others, comprehension skills, and shutting up skills.

            You can’t expect to be a success if you can’t work with others, because you’re going to have to work with your boss, your co-workers, and maybe even the people that will work for you. Teamwork helps build confidence and trust. You can make new friends as well. Working with others is a very critical thing that you need to know in order to be a success.

            If you don’t have any comprehension skills, there’s no way you’ll survive two minutes in the 21st century. Comprehending is when you can understand, explain, and evaluate things. It’s also when you get the meaning of something or become aware of what’s happening around you. If you can’t do at least that, you’ll never get a job. The world around you will be more confusing. This is what you should be taught at school. It’s crucial that you are taught this because you’ll have to use it every day for the rest of your life.

            The most important skill to be taught is how to shut up when you’re supposed to.  The most annoying people that you could meet or work with are the people that talk, and talk, and keep talking, but they don’t know when to shut up. Learning to shut up is important because when you need to listen and remember important things, you can’t because you’re the one with the big mouth that keeps interrupting. You talk so much that other people can’t.

            These are the most important things that should be taught in order to succeed in the 21st century. How to work with others, learn comprehension skills, and shutting up skills. By learning I’m confident that I’ll be a success in the future.  

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Reading your post about the long day made me tired! It sounded very productive though! and I totally love this essay! Can I use some of it in my class? Especially the part about shutting up? LOVE IT!

army of one said...

will it be okay if I use Princess's essay to show to my students. She did an excellent job pointing out skills you need in the real world. Love it. Your kids are super gifted. They take it from you and the King. Love you guys!

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